The Missing

This is a piece of writing that Stella and I have been working on but we have not finished writing it or editing it so we are going to give you guys, a sneak peeks at our writing please give us some comments about our writing.

My ice cream is melting down my hand, that’s when I know it's summertime and school’s out! We all race out of school. The last day of school is always fun because we get ice cream. I have already started my list of what I’m going to do. Number 1: go to the end of the year graduation ball for seniors only at the high school. Yay, it was my last day at high school this year now I can start my dream job of cooking if only I had a cafe and money to buy ingredients and drinks. When I get home I see mum and Dad waiting at the table. “Come have a seat we need to talk,” said Dad “Your cousin is coming for New York Later and you need to be on your best behavior,” Said Mum. “But Mum I need to pick up my friends and set up the ball and I won't have enough seats in the car. Fine, she can come with me”. Ding Dong “ I know who that is”. “ Come in Come in, please. How are you” “ Fantastic how are you” “Good Good what do you want to do tonight because there is a ball on tonight”. “ Yea that’s a good Idea I will be ready in 5 minutes if you need my help I am good at decorating”. “Ok” “What is the theme?’’ “Under the sea” “OMG that is my favorite theme to do. How can I help.” asks Annabell. “You can start by moving this box to the car and then you can get ready for the ball,’’ I ask. “Do you have any clothes to wear to the ball?” “yes, I have a choice I was going ask for help to get it out of my car.’’ “Yea yea sure I can help you get it out,’’ I say. “Come on then where am I staying?’’ “ Up in the spare bedroom where there are rats. I’m just joking around let's go grab your stuff.” 1 hour later “ Is that everything out of your car.” “ No, we need to grab  my puppy.” “Quick we're going to be late for the ball when we are driving in my car.” “Then we'll take mine jump in.” “STOP you're going too fast can you slow down.