Tuesday, 6 June 2017

grow a sentence




Date:
Grow a sentence workshop activity. Recrafting, adding details.
I went to town.
On Wednesday, I drove my dusty, dirty car to the busy center of town to buy some colorful paper for art.
I like ice cream.
The ice cream dripping down my hand my favourite flavour is chocolate.
The car was fast.
The grey car zoomed down the street making the puddles on the road splash up and hit me in the face.
We walked to school.
One winter morning I was walking to school and there was a forest and I forgot my jersey so I raced back to the house to get it.
Now select 3 sentences from a piece of your own writing, paste them below and recraft by growing your sentences.
Burning the backing


I smell smoke it’s coming out of the oven NO I’m burning the backing.
I went to the zoo


I hear animal sounds all around me I’m at the Zoo yay.

Racetrack

Zooming down the twisty roads passing cars I must be at the race track.

1 comment:

  1. I think I need your "grow a sentence" here at work today Liv.. my work is boring. I'm going to spice it up like your blog post.❤️

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