Weekly reflection

This week I have been working with my learning team and we have been writing a story. Here is the start. Aiden, Sophia, Abigail and Jackson are four best friends who go to Franklin School. Aiden has short brown hair, brown eyes, is 12 and is fast at running. Sophia has straight blond hair, blue eyes, is 12 and likes playing in the swimming pool. Abigail has red curly hair, blue eyes, is 11 and is really good at maths. Jackson has green eyes, black hair, is 13 and is really strong.

Every morning Aiden, Sophia, Abigail and Jackson meetup at Luna Street and ride their bikes to school together.  But Aiden always is trying to beat the others to school and be the leader.  Once they got to school they all went to art. “Did you hear that”  Asked Sophia “No Sophia it’s dead silent” said Aiden. “What did you supposedly hear Soph”? “The wall, its creaking”...

Smash, the wall crashed and fell on Jackson, he was trapped he couldn’t move. Jackson was in pain and didn’t have a positive mind set. When the dust had cleared the others found Jackson just laying there “Help me!” said Jackson. “I am going to go and find the first aid kit and bandage jackson up once we get him out”. Said Sophia. When Sophie got back, Abigail said “Come on we can do it, have some faith. I have courage, I mean, I help people when they need it, and I have guts and grit to show that I am responsible and caring. “ I think for the plan to get jackson out  we need Abigail and I to lift at the same time and then Sophie can pull Jackson out and bandage him up.

The plan worked Sophia bandaged Jackson up and then they made a little trailer so they could tow Jackson to the hospital. When they got to the hospital they rushed to the surgery room because Jackson had glass and wood in his leg and he had to get it out as fast as they could .When jackson came out of surgery he was sore and in pain so he stayed at the hospital overnight. “I know that his parents will freak out so let's just say we haven’t seen him yet